The Official Writing Challenge
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Great analogy! The world is dying around us - let's share our wonderful gift!
Great analogy and enjoyable to read. I could see the little girl's expression as I read.
Nice picture of the way we hold on to our prize, but not so nice in how we hold on so selfishly.
I like the way your story developed and the analogy with releasing His Word so that others could get His message of salvation. It was well done.
Good job! Thank you for sharing this piece.