The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
Great analogy! The world is dying around us - let's share our wonderful gift!
Great analogy and enjoyable to read. I could see the little girl's expression as I read.
02/21/05
Nice picture of the way we hold on to our prize, but not so nice in how we hold on so selfishly.
I like the way your story developed and the analogy with releasing His Word so that others could get His message of salvation. It was well done.
02/27/05
Good job! Thank you for sharing this piece.