The Official Writing Challenge
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04/15/06
Oh ... so sad ... did things like this really happen? War is awful! You've written well. The theme of fulfilment was clear too. Thanks for a peek into history.
04/19/06
What an interesting story! This is time period that I know very little about.

You have a few grammar slip-ups here and there: some unnecessary apostrophes, a run-on or two, etc., but the character really drives this entry, and she's fascinating. Good job.