The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
This is a gripping account, hopefully part of a bigger story you plan to write! I love your Mary character and hope you keep writing.
You have a very powerful image developing in your character! She is so strong, so fierce in her dedication! Captivating!
04/22/06
I have Native American heritage, and I felt the characters emotions as the story unfolded. Very well done.
05/26/06
This is quite a story! Undoubtedly, there could be more! Great attention to detail, scene setting and wonderful descriptive writing! Jo :)