The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
This has a very interesting twist. A great message. Nicely done.
04/13/06
This is an awesome, gripping story and a winner in my book! This is going into my "favorites." Keep writing--God has given you a wonderful talent.
This was a great article! I stayed very interested. One thing on the writing though, if you would leave spaces between the paragraphs and between conversation it would have made the reading easier.
Well done! I winner in my books.
04/15/06
oooohhh, nice and sneaky. I loved it! And your writing carried me right along. Good work!
04/15/06
I'm not sure I understand this...was Pete a ghost? If so, this is a bit problematic, theologically. It's possible that I'm just reading it wrong, however. Very good writing skills, and you're an expert storyteller.
04/17/06
Perhaps it was a vision she experienced (that's how I saw it, anyway).