The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
Drugs do kill - I wonder if she found Jesus before she died. Sad ending to a broken life.
Seems ro me she didn't intend not to wake up -"Tomorrow would be different..." In my opinion this story would make a good lesson for teens to avoid drugs and alcohol.
04/17/06
Read this, again, with the first paragraph at the end. Start with the story (good for baiting the 'hook') and your readers will better appreciate the application (first paragraph).