The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/06
Wonderful until the last paragraph, the imperative 2nd. person is definant to the otherwise very well written 3rd. person statement. Make edits and send this to a Christian Writers Conference for a devotion period.
04/14/06
I see where you were going with the last paragraph and it seems necessary on the surface. But this piece is not a surface piece! Continue the depth until the end! I loved this perspective. One I can't beleive I haven't given much thought to, but is one so exciting to look forward to! Great job!
04/15/06
"Instead seek God, and in everything you do, do it to please him. For he is the one who fulfills all the desires of our heart." Beautiful, thank you!
04/17/06
How beautiful! I was immediately drawn into the plight of the individual to make a difference in the lives of others and the world.