The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/06
This reads like prose, but is "arranged" like poetry. Consider putting this in more conventional paragraphs, and I think it will increase its readability. You have great things to say--keep up the good work!
04/18/06
I very much enjoyed your entry on Fulfillment -- especially the use of scripture in a progressive form to the present day.