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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fulfillment (04/06/06)

TITLE: Fulfillment (ii)
By Jenilea Jamieson
04/08/06


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Fulfillment what is it; this is what we want to know. We seek it, we long for it this is what I know. Fulfillment of your dreams, your goals and desires. Fulfillment of your life ,your longing for love. What is it you may ask, and this I cannot say. Fulfillment is not a thing but a feeling you may have. Fulfillment we all want, we all seek for. In money, fame or something more. Could there be a one and only thing that could do this for us? A thing, a being, a Master we donít know? A thing that could give us the peace that we long for?
I have heard of this one, this thing they call Lord. They say it will give you the deepest fulfillment of your life. Not money, not cars not even love can replace this amazing thing they speak of. Its greater then even our minds can comprehend, yet it is so easy to require. Why? I ask, why? Why do we search to the ends of the earth, to expose the mystery of lifeís deepest fulfillment? Could it be that its here in front of you and me. Closer then we realize?
This I have come to understand can only be fulfilled in a single man. A man, you may ask what could it mean? A man that lived 2000 years ago in the simple land of Israel? Yes my friend it is the truth, it is that easy to comprehend. That the man who died and rose again, is the one for you friend!


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Jan Ackerson 04/17/06
Your writing is full of truth. Almost half of your sentences are questions, though, which tends to be frustrating for readers. If you re-visit this, consider adding specific examples from your life or others' lives, to illustrate your main point. You'll "hook" your readers more readily that way. Thanks for this encouraging word.