The Official Writing Challenge
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Gentle story of letting go. Need a few paragraph breaks. You have a tender touch, keep it going.
Nicely written and with a few adjustments (spacing mainly), this would be an easy read with a gently strong message.
Yes, paragraph separation would make it a much easier read; however, it is a sweet story - but doesn't seem realistic to me. Keep up the good work...there is great potential.
Precious! I loved the ending with her new picture. Great story.
This is really sweet...but do angels really do that? I wonder if your main character could make her discoveries through God-directed circumstances, gentle nudgings...I like your gentle writing style.
Interesting idea and good little twist at the end with the addition of the new picture. As was already mentioned, it doesn't seem very realistic, but still a nice story. :)
Nice story. Your emotions are real but the characters aren't fleshed out enough to give the story the impact it needs. You have a very readable writing style - with some editing this will be a very good story.