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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fulfillment (04/06/06)

TITLE: I Thought You Could
By Gale BROWN
04/06/06


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I thought that you could fulfil all of my dreams. I was your puppet on a string; wherever you pull that was the way I would go.

I thought that you could protect me from every danger that came my way. I denied my family so that I could be with you.

I thought that we would always be together and you would never leave me. You were there to fulfil all of my hearts desires. I lean on you for my everything and I didn't go unless you told me to.

But when you left, my world fell apart, I had no where to go and no one to love me. You put me out in the street as if I was an old dog. You torn down my esteem and broke my heart into a million pieces. I loved you and for that was punished.

But now I am a woman of God, knowing that I am the daughter of the Most High Father. I no longer have to hold my head down or cried tears of an unfulfil love. There is nothing wrong with me and I am glad that you did put me out.
For never would have learn the fulfillment of the Master love for me. I would never had known that He loved me so much that His Son went to the Cross for me.

In all that I have been through, I know that knowing Jesus brought me true fulfillment.


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Gini Branch04/13/06
Quite a journey. We've all travelled this road in some form. Liked the simple honesty conveyed here.
Carol Shaffron04/14/06
You told my story! I guess there are more than a few of us this has happened to. Blessings Abundant.
Virginia Gorg04/14/06
Oh, I like this and can relate. Note, watch for tense and subject agreement for a much better read.
Marilyn Schnepp 04/17/06
This story has a very good message, pointing to what DOES make for complete fulfillment; however, needs editing badly. When perfected, it could be a great testimony.
Marie Hearty 04/18/06
I loved your story. It brought tears to my eyes and was just what I needed to read at this time in my life. Thank you so much for writing this. God bless you.