The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Yes, we can change our world with prayerful actions. Good message! Bless you for the reminder.
Prayer is good...but we also need to take some actions. The bible says that if someone is in need, simply saying a prayer is not enough...we should do something about it.
Quite an interesting and unique view on the word fulfillment. God is surely speaking through your piece...

Will we hear?
Thank you for your thought-provoking poem. Prayer is an important way to communicate with God, and I felt in this poem as if it was given a back seat. There are just some things that we cannot do ourselves, but give them over to God to do instead - through prayer.
04/16/06
Great motivating, convicting message - we are created unto good works.
04/17/06
This poem did not have the smoothest rhythm and flow, but it Sure Did Hit The Nail on the Head when it comes to getting Up OFF our knees and putting our faith to work! It told it "like it is" - very thought provoking. I liked it! Nicely done.
04/18/06
Me too! This message is a wake-up call that would also make a wonderful premise for a story.I liked it. :0)