The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
Great story. A couple of little punctuation things, but very well done. Loved the surprise ending. Isn't it true-we take all the precautions, and then one little mistake teaches us it was God all along who was looking after things. Congratulations.
03/14/06
Suzette as the guard dog is great. She succeeded in her mission. Well told story. Comfortable style.
03/15/06
Very tender and sweet. Did you mean "the Lord who was my protector" at the end? I love the idea of a poodle guard dog. Nice story.
03/20/06
Lovely story, and congratulations on placing