The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this article. You held my attention to the very end. This is a sure winner in my books.
03/15/06
Good job of building tension for the reader.
10/02/06
A fantastic read! Nicely done, and keeping your reader in suspense throughout. Like I've so often said...God does answer knee-mail. Great story and very well done! Enjoyed the read immensely.