The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
This was a very interesting way to write a one way conversation.
03/14/06
Well done. I could feel her upsetting situation.

By any chance have you seen a set of keys laying around. I lost them about a week ago when I started this story. lol
03/15/06
This is a very amusing situation, and very plausible! Consider re-visiting this as a more conventional short story, with narrative sections, and dialog with the police officer. It might have a more readable "flow" that way. I loved reading her mounting frustration--good job.