The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
A few grammer issues, but I like the way in which you've wrapped the theme. Great message, keep up the good work.
03/14/06
Very good extended metaphor--I especially liked "I notice signs of unfastening." Good job.
I really liked this one. There is just enough detail to get interested in the story. Good job.