The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
Really good idea for a story--write this one out full-length!
03/16/06
"He could not escape from sin" is a good line - perhaps an expansion to remind us that we must escape from sin during life - it's too late if we wait until we die.
Expand, explain and explore! We want more. Great premise. Keep writing. I want to read more!
03/18/06
Very interesting! The Title lured me in. Thanks.
breif and to the point, nice job
03/24/06
Boy, you don't hold back any punches! Good job!