The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
What a beautiful allegory!
03/15/06
This was very well done. Keep writing!
I can't believe you only have two comments! I also can't believe that you're beginner! You have some real talent. This story was fantastic. I'm very impressed. Would be shocked if this doesn't place in this category.
I was really drawn into this piece to the point where I was getting goose bumps and when I read the word 'sinnerville' and it just killed the whole thing. Still a good piece though.
03/20/06
The idea that he didn't know there was anyone greater than his tormentor is really chilling. Great writing, and congratulations
Wonderful. No wonder it was a winner! Good writing too.