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03/14/06
A nice little mini-mystery and treasure hunt--but I'm wondering why the dad would give him a locked-up Bible. Wouldn't he want the son to read the Bible as soon as possible? Very good writing, and right on-topic.
03/16/06
Nice mystery, but I expected a letter from his dad (a witness letter perhaps) rather than the Bible itself. The phrase 'years passed' seems like it should have been longer than just four years (12 to 16). An easy read and well done.
Great job!
It doesn't make any sense to me either, why would his dad lock up a Bible?