The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
A worthy call to action! Work on rhyme and meter for an easier flow....great use of the topic word!
I agree with Jan's comments. This has a great message!
The meter started out good but toward the end it got off a bit. The words didn't rythm but most of them were close enough. I thought the ending wasn't strong enough. There is something missing that I can't place my finger on. I did enjoy reading it though.