The Official Writing Challenge
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Great verse. Very meaningful and makes one ponder whether they to are doing the very same thing week after week. One little suggestion, break up your poem into stanzas. it makes it easier to read.
03/14/06
"Say amen, then depart, thinking you have done your part..." This is the best line, and very pointed.
03/14/06
This is good. It might could be song lyrics.
03/16/06
Hmm, yes, a song - also makes us consider if we are merely making the motions or are we real? Nicely done.
This is great. I think every pastor should recite to this to his congregation to shake them up!Good job!