The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/06
Your 5th paragraph is very compelling;; consider expanding that into its own story. Otherwise, you might want to edit to keep down the number of metaphors--you've got battlefields, armor, cords, locks.
Written with great passion and conviction, this one really preaches!
03/14/06
A lot of great encouragement in your words. You are so right when you say that Satan can lure us with his deceit, and he can do it very well and in ways that we don't know at first. Then after the damage is done, we look back and think, all that was going on and I didn't even see. The good thing, is that the next time he tries something, we are ready for him. Always cling to Jesus and don't ever let go. Not even for a minute
03/16/06
a GREAT challenge to all of us Christians!
03/16/06
Sin is concieved when we are drawn away by our own lusts and enticed. We must choose to reject our lusts.