The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
What a wonderful story! Consider "fictionalizing" this and writing it as a full-fledged short story--it's quite charming.
I agree with Jan. This would make a great short story.
03/14/06
I agree with the others. It would make a great short story. I liked how you described the poor people as being friendly, as so often they are not seen that way. Great going.
What year was that? I really enjoyed this story a lot. Doesn't the Bible say when we help other people it's like helping Jesus.
Great job!