The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/05
I thought the analogy of flypaper was interesting and creative. The spacing on this made it hard to read, but looked like it was unintentional. I liked how you showed how we gett "stuck" and then what a job to free ourselves!
I have such a vivid imagination and I could just see this fly paper and all the damage it was doing and how the more you struggle the worse it gets. Then you brought it around a little more.
02/23/05
Precise and to the point. At first I thought, "Gross-Flypaper!" Then I realized this was an excellent analogy because selfishness is even nastier than flypaper. Well done.
02/24/05
Stuck in the flypaper? Yuck. Jesus gets us out of all kind of sticky messes. I've never seen a fly rescue himself.