The Official Writing Challenge
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03/13/06
Wow! I loved this! "She had known him as her child, and now as her savior..." Really good stuff!
Well done! This is a sure winner in my books. Keep writing!
03/13/06
Clever approach. In all the events after the death of Christ, we don't usually think about what happened to Mary as John fulfilled Jesus' command to take her into his home. Very nicely done.
I thought this was really well written. I could spot most if not all the references to the events in the Gospels, very nice.
03/14/06
ohmygosh, I LOVED this! (no more words needed...)
This piece touched my soul. It brought tears of comfort to me. I felt like I was right in the room with Mary. Excellent job illustrating. Keep writing!

Kathy Mikshenas
03/14/06
This was so moving and beautifully written. Bless you for your insight into a mothers most intimate feelings towards her son, and our Savior.
03/16/06
Beautiful, it made tears come to my eyes.
Oh my! This is such a great piece! What an absolutly creative story! Well done!
This was beautiful! Looooved it!

This is such a beautiful story. Thanks so much for sharing it.