The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
Feels like Pilgrim's Progress. Nice description. Good work.
03/11/06
Excellent choice of images to show that the right path through life still has dangers if you venture from it.

I, as a reader, would like to see a space between paragraphs; it just makes the piece easier to read.

Good descriptions. I liked this: "The path to the right seemed to speak to her heart. She followed her heart and began down the path to the right of the ancient redwood tree." Thanks for sharing.