The Official Writing Challenge
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April enters for a new beginning. Good writing.
03/11/06
There are so many wonderful sentences here! My favorites: "April had spent the majority of her life trying to destroy it."; "Much to her dismay, she always survived, got away with her misbehavior and poor judgment with consequences inconsequential to her." The last three paragraphs are powerful, showing the life-changing miracle of salvation.

I have been an April and have known a couple of Aprils. You have described that mindset very well. I would just try to tighten up the piece a little, choosing every word for its impact. Good job!