The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
Well done. I like the way you resisted bringing some revelation to Allison out the blue that made her change her mind. Instead the answer was there in front of her all the time. Good job.
03/08/06
Good writing! Good ending too!:)
Simplistic in its truth, direct and forgiving. Well written and well done.
03/09/06
You creatively presented the emotional, mental and moral struggle anyone in Allison's position would face. You also presented our loving, sovereign God as One Who will meet us wherever we are and in means we can understand, if we're looking. I enjoyed the read!
03/10/06
I didn't figure it out until the end. Very nicely done and thought-provoking.