The Official Writing Challenge
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What I think of when I read this was the bible talking about the greatest of these is love. It was as if jesus knew that if we could love, we would not hurt, waste or be spiteful. We would not be able to put ourselves first because love of others would be more prevailing. Good thoughts here.
You have the gift of teaching and your story was well written. As a mother I'm encouraged to teach my children this graciousness now.
I like lessons to be less preachy and more personable. Good scripture references though.
You've made some great points. This would read great as "10 Commandments" or to lighten it up a bit you could turn it into a "Top Ten" list.