The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
My plane had barely landed before I wondered if I had made a mistake—and I was going to a much more "civilized" country. I was with you all the way. Great description of the process. Good job.
03/07/06
You expressed her feelings very naturally. Wait til she tries to recharge her laptop or cellphone. Very nice!
03/10/06
Excellent! Very descriptive and realistic. A few minor errors (sleeve, a bit overuse of 'then'), but I really like this. Flows nice, holds attention and makes me wonder if it's a true story. :)
03/10/06
Wonderful, that all her misgivings were melted away with the encounter with the child. Just the right touch. Thanks!
03/10/06
I really enjoyed reading this story. :)
03/11/06
A very interesting story and well written. I guess the topic "Enter" is spelled out in the entering of new territory and new country.