The Official Writing Challenge
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I really could tell you have special memories of your grandmother. The first half was very enjoyable. Your whole piece was very descriptive. But the second half was not capturing my intrest as much as the beginning. Keep up the good work and maybe add few more paragraphs to please lol.
God Bless
03/11/06
Quite difficult to follow through and read without the spacing of paragraphs. A Writer's first goal is to make their writing "Reader Friendly" so that it is an easy read. Thank you for sharing.