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The plight of an unwed young girl about to become a mother is expressed wonderfully. The ending is good. The first two paragraphs could be re-worked to attract the attention of the readers.
03/09/06
Nicely done. Reminds me of a local house for pregnant teens - they are welcomed, nurtured, and loved unconditionally. Just a few edits on some words, and you have a truly nice article.