The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
I love it! I can feel her fear as she's running and then her peace when she finds Hope. Great job :-)
03/08/06
Very good! Loved the opening paragraph.
03/10/06
I like the idea of the Holy Spirit as a gentle breeze. Perfect.
03/10/06
Nicely done—great "pictures". I especially like this: "the breeze stopped. So she stopped." Sometimes we tend to run ahead of God as much as we often lag behind Him. Great thought to go at His pace and stop when He does.