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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Enter (02/27/06)

TITLE: There Is Hope
By Donnie Vaughan
03/01/06


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The large doors closed behind as she searched for her husbandís room.
The lady at the desk said he was moved from surgery about noon Friday and this was
Just a few hours since she had been with him. You see he had been in a terrible car wreck,
And it was not looking good for them. The doctors had all but given him up; they said there was nothing left that they could do for him. A course she new better. For she had been praying for God to work a miracle for him. All the while he lay as if there were no
Signs of hope, his family had been there all the time and they were all getting tired and the hospital food was not helping them either. Time spent a hospital can really get you in a state of depression and can cause a lot of problems in some one that is well, Itís been two weeks now and he has begun to respond to therapy and medication, his wife never gave up, for she new there is always hope and with him starting to get better she felt that she needed some time alone to thank her God for the blessings and answer to her prayers,
As she is about to enter the hospital chapel she is stopped by the doctor that treated her husband, he told her that he could not explain it to her but there had been so much improving with her husband Jim that he might be able to go home in a few days, dawn looked at the doctor and smiled as she explained that God had been working on Jimís problems and she new everything was going to be fine. Although we go through this world thinking we have everything in our control, when we really do not . it had been a long three weeks but the trials were over at least for now.
As she said goodbye to all the nurses and staff she was glad to be going home and taking Jim back with her.


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esther robinson03/07/06
This incident reminds me of the verse, 'your hope will not be cut off' - Good writing.
terri tiffany03/08/06
You had great content here. You might want to space the paragraphs for easier reading. I would also watch the use of 'you' as you are telling the story. I think with a little editing, this could be a very good piece!:)