The Official Writing Challenge
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This incident reminds me of the verse, 'your hope will not be cut off' - Good writing.
03/08/06
You had great content here. You might want to space the paragraphs for easier reading. I would also watch the use of 'you' as you are telling the story. I think with a little editing, this could be a very good piece!:)