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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Selfishness (02/14/05)

TITLE: I AM the Center of My World
By Shellie Power
02/17/05


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I am the center of my world and my needs and wants are also the center of yours. I cry and scream and demand your immediate attention. I do not care about your need for peace. I am not willing to wait until the "right time" to call on you for I have decided you will be available NOW!

I am the center of my world and my needs and wants are also the center of yours. I occupy space on your lists of things to do; because I am number one on that list, it will be a long time before you get to number two. I take your hand and use it to guide me and as I hold on to you I expect you to be steady. If on a whimsy I jump, I know your hand will somehow be there to catch me. I require you to have your hands open constantly to me. When I cry I depend on your smile to make the tears disappear.

I want your thoughts to focus on what I want. I am able to make you forget what is on your mind. I am the center of my world and also of yours. My helplessness requires your all. My frailty depends on your strength. You will do for me all that I can't and you will be for me all that I am not.

I seem selfish. I can not and will not say "Thank-You" but I will learn to be like you. I will watch. I will mimic. I will be like you. By providing for my needs now you are teaching me by your example how to be selfless. As I grow and gain independence I need you to show me that I AM is the center of my world and therefore I am NOT.

Show me who makes you strong. Show me who fills you up. Show me who keeps a hand open constantly to you. Show me who you call on when you need help NOW! Show me I AM. I need to learn that I AM is the center of my world and therefore I am NOT.


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Amy Davis02/21/05
That was good! Good perspective on this topic.
donna robinson02/22/05
Great "show me" piece. A child is the center of his universe and yours and will only mimic what she sees and hears. I really enjoyed reading this. Good sharp lines.
Sally Hanan02/25/05
Very good. You deserve a win with this one.
Crista Darr02/28/05
This reflects not only the parent-child relationship but our relationship with Jesus as well. Good work!