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01/17/05
Frightening experience well told. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
01/18/05
Good writing. Some words were mis-spelled. like 'scalding'.Usually I can see a message through a piece, but I don't see one here. You could thread through it how God knows how thoughtless we are as children but He walks us through that pain of recovery until there are virtually no scars remianing.
I can easily see this story in a magazine, especially for young mothers. Be sure to keep this story near, especially if you plan on publishing in the near future. Great job with this. I loved reading it!
01/20/05
You've done a fine job re-counting the events of that night. You should take it further - has God taught you something? Do you see things differently now? Thanks for sharing your story - keep it up!
01/21/05
whoa...that's a first no parent would want.
Your title grabbed me right off the bat. God bless you.
08/08/05
Your title, as well, caught me in a curious venture to see what it was about! A poignant story of a parent's scare of what boiling water can do... Thanks for sharing the story, and hey, you should draw up a conclusion of what it taught you, etc. and send it in to a Mother's magazine!