The Official Writing Challenge
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03/06/06
This is awesome. I loved it! Thanks for sharing it....
Great job, very encouraging.
You started this piece with God drawing you into a relationship. Then you switched your focus to others. This I found confusing. However, your article is well written and a good biblical focus. Perhaps some personnel examples of this relationship with Jesus would make this a stronger piece.