The Official Writing Challenge
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02/28/06
Great plot and interesting to read. At times,I am having a little trouble understanding which character is speaking though. I know you probably didn't want to remove the element of suspense and ruin the plot but maybe there is another way to intro and specify who is speaking. Such as, "the woman at the house answered" or "the woman standing in the doorway"?
03/03/06
Yes, I too had a little trouble knowing who was speaking, but the suspense was there alright.