The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/06
OBEDIENCE, TRUST and FAITH are addressed in what appears to be Bible study notes, here, but "Help" is missing, I fear. Perhaps, in following the challenge, you could have focused on the storm, when Jonah "helped" the other sailors by confessing he was the guilty one. Concentrate on narrowing your perspective to the heart of the assignment, and keep writing!
03/05/06
Organize your thoughts better and try to make your writing flow together "Help" is lacking in this piece. Focus more on the topic. Some good points in this article about pride and the importance of following God's leading.