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You are correct in the fact that many of us turn to other things or people, before we realize that we should turn to Jesus. Yet there was a sad note, very sad that those you wanted to turn to may have been busy.

As we need to be there to help bear the burdens of each other. How many times have we all had and will have in the future those same thoughts of despair.

I enjoyed the story,and...well...since you are now talking to Jesus, can I have the cheesecake? lol
03/01/06
[There's that "lol" again, that I have seen only in notes at faithwriters. Would someone explain what it stands for?] You did a good job working through your character's self analysis. Quite readable, even tho' I'm not keen on the subject matter, being rather weary of self-absorbed introspection :)
03/02/06
A very well written essay - and bears a great message for those who need a "somebody". Yes, He's always THERE when others are not. Nice job!