The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title was just right for your story. The one thing I would comment on is that, somewhere along the line, (great I forgot their names already) she shared Jesus with the teen, but you presented it well. I like the last line.
03/06/06
Such a beautiful story; I loved it..and congratulations for your Win! This story was very well written and moved me to tears. Thank you.
03/06/06
Congratulations! This is a piece just full of grace, and a gently taught lesson. Very nice.
03/06/06
i'm crying. i love your characters!!! oh! wonderful!
03/12/06
Just like Mary and Martha.