The Official Writing Challenge
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Sometimes the world doesn't seem to have room for those who care or reach out. The movers and shakers are getting stronger each day. I guess we better start working out too. as you said, there is a way out.
02/24/05
A painful reminder that we must die daily. The truth hurts sometimes. You made some excellent points but I encourage you to proof-read before submitting.
02/24/05
Good opening. Some may find your use of the words 'My dear' a bit condescending. Good points, quotes and verses.