The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/06
Very good! Well thought out and written as well. It is true that we to strive for peace in the wrong ways and even for the wrong motives. Our true peace is found in the One who is true and lasting peace==It will elude us if we try any other path.
I do think that you need to look for other ways to stress the point you are making other than capitalization of the point you are making. I think it could even strengthen the point. I must say that you left out an important Beatle(or was it John?)--All we are saying is give peace a chance!

Blessings!
Thanks for reminding that ultimately the Almighty God is Yehovah Shalom, Jesus Christ is Prince of Peace and the Holy Spirit is the Comforter. Good writing.