The Official Writing Challenge
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You loved to hate Jessica when you read this! Great style here!
02/22/05
This really captured my attention from start to finish. I liked how it shows that the choices we make, when not in sinc with God's Will, make it hard for us to do His work.
02/22/05
I liked this! Good job!
02/24/05
Very well-written. Excellent tie in between self-righteousness and selfishness. You show awesome truths in this piece. Whoever exalts himself will be abased.
02/27/05
Good job! Thank you for sharing this story with us.
02/28/05
Sally,

Very vivid description. The words make the picture of Jessica come alive in the reader's head. Good work. God bless you,
Cheri
Great job, Sally. This silly, selfish, self-important woman breathes through your words. Very well done!