The Official Writing Challenge
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I have to say, this poem is every bit a description of me. So many times I've failed to say something knowing full well that I should. It captures the complete essence of those moments. Very good!
A well written work. You paint the picture of so many of us with a bold hand and heart.
02/22/05
Perfect :)
Amen..Amen...Amen! I would love to see this poem in the entry way of every church or placed in the bulletin...or better yet, written on the hearts of men. I love it!
02/23/05
Excellent!
02/24/05
This is a 'winning' poem - a soul winning poem! Yes, I've been there too but I'm reminded of Peter's victory after he denied Jesus. We can only be effective witnesses by the power of His Spirit in us. I love this poem!
02/26/05
Please move to the advanced level! This was well written with a deep message. May God bless you!
03/03/05
Beautifully written with a powerful message!
Wow! A great, GREAT poem. Loved every line.