The Official Writing Challenge
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This just has such a strong and poweful voice, you read it with this booming voice in your head! I liked the way you brought it to a soothing close.
02/22/05
I was very confused reading this until finally at the end I realized it was selfishness talking, or was it?
Nicely done. I liked the twist.
02/24/05
Fantastic! Its really humbling to know that without Christ this is all of us.