The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm no great speller, and forgive any errors as this doesn't have a spell check, but your story intriqued me. I felt that the boy was Franks child from another marriage? Any way I felt you captured in the woman her reluctance to talk with anyone, and rely on herself so she would never be hurt again by people. I am sure many of us know that feeling. Good Job!
03/03/06
Intriguing story, kept my interest...but what a let-down...no ending! I wanted a conclusion...it left me hanging. However, nicely written.
I really enjoyed this story. It was incredibly well written. (surprised it's a beginners) and had a clear, true moral to the story. All in all, a great read.
This is a very good article. Especially for a beginning level. Very strong message here.