The Official Writing Challenge
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This are really a tightly woven verses! What greed can take place in the scene you painted. Excellent read
02/22/05
You did an excellent job with this piece. I like how you exposed what often goes on in each of us--going through the motions just to please.
02/22/05
Wow! That was so good, very well written.
02/22/05
This was brilliant. You should definitely not be in the beginners' section!