The Official Writing Challenge
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I think your title says it all. It's hard to do otherwise, isn't it? You gave us food for thought...
Good job. Makes me long for heaven.
Very true and written very well.
Very good points. In selfishness we attempt to please ourselves but the only true blessing comes when we deny ourselves. I would enjoy your poem more if your lines were not so abrupt. Maybe combine some?
Living beyond is going that extra mile for someone else and making that sacrifice for others that we would appreciate if done for us. You said it all in your poem.