The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/05
Great storytelling and I love that you gave her a shared name with Jezabel. Very creative!
01/18/05
Told well (hehe). Because the story was in modern English, it would be good to have the scripture written the same way ie. NLT/ The Message/ Living Bible.
01/20/05
You did a great job setting the scene at the beginning. I could see the well and the people coming and going. Liked it!
01/20/05
What a great adaptation, and a believable one as well. The personalities of your characters shine through. God bless.
01/21/05
loved the title and the story!
I liked the way you brought this story to life in a new light. God bless you.
This is wonderful. I'm so glad I read it! Great writing, great message, very creative. Loved it!