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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: End (02/13/06)

TITLE: Was That The End
By Victoria Dame
02/14/06


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My Lord Jesus, while on the cross said to his father it is finished.
I wonder with his death was his love diminished?
Being placed in a borrowed tome was that the conclusion?
His life on this earth was it just an illusion?
Or was this just the beginning of the closing stages?
A time when the sins of man, against God rages.
God's word tells me this was not the last part.
That if I'll turn to Jesus he'll cleanse my heart.
My achievements of good won't stand as a culmination.
I'll have to except his invitation.
And before my life's book is closed.
The music of my life must be composed.
And through Jesus' love there will be completion
He would have scraped away my sins accretion.
And then for the grand finale.
Of my sins there will be no tally.
Before my time of expiration.
I know I'll look to him for my salvation.
So now I know his dealth was the beginning not the end.
He died so that I could be forgiven for my sin.


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Jan Ackerson 02/23/06
Content-wise, this poem is lovely, and your rhyme scheme is just fine. Check your spelling of "tomb" and "death," and be more careful of punctuation. Consider evening out the meter a bit...

Beautiful wording in lines 2, 13, and 14 in particular.